There’s a really interesting tension between the physical and the spiritual here. The character used to feel connected to something deeper.... and now that connection feels uncertain, almost out of reach. It makes every decision feel heavier… like he’s not just navigating survival, but trying to remember how to trust something he’s losing. This was amazing world-building! I am looking forward to reading more!
This is really atmospheric and draws you in. I liked the sense of hunger, shame and mystery running through the chapter, especially the ravens and the forest imagery. It feels quiet but tense, with a strong sense that something unsettling is coming.
There’s a really interesting tension between the physical and the spiritual here. The character used to feel connected to something deeper.... and now that connection feels uncertain, almost out of reach. It makes every decision feel heavier… like he’s not just navigating survival, but trying to remember how to trust something he’s losing. This was amazing world-building! I am looking forward to reading more!
Thank you, this means a lot. Restacks are always appreciated!
This is really atmospheric and draws you in. I liked the sense of hunger, shame and mystery running through the chapter, especially the ravens and the forest imagery. It feels quiet but tense, with a strong sense that something unsettling is coming.
Thank you. I hope you like the rest of the story, too.